Both looks very good. Eggs are pretty amazing with shadows.. so soft.
Seeing this second image, makes me think the first may have a little to much light red tone in it?
I'm thinking the same but didn't spend the time to decipher the issue last night.
The second is a toned B&W while the first is color, so that has something to do with it. The oddest thing is that I have
no idea where the red tone is coming from in the first photos since there is nothing in the room I shot in that was red - except for my tripod, which was completely obscured by the table the egg was sitting on. I sat in LR and started playing with the saturation sliders, desaturating one hue at a time, and each time I'd pull one back it would be replaced by another. What it seems to be is a refraction of the light around the edge of the egg, so as I desaturate each hue the next/another is apparent, with reds at the left edge and magenta at the bottom right. Sort of neat.
What I believe "fixes" it is a -15 tweak of the green/magenta slider and a +6 tweak to the blue/yellow slider in the WB section. What do you think?