Scott Murray
Senior Member
Ok this is a candid shot not posed and using only natural light....
Any critique good or bad (badder the better) is appreciated.
Any critique good or bad (badder the better) is appreciated.
Better?You know my knowledge of portrait images to me it looks like a nice candid gab shot,the dislike i have is the framing,a bit off the right would look better to me as i dont like the way her back runs down.
See now I did not see that but know you mention it I can see what you are referring too. This is why any kind of critique is good CheersIt is to me,i think it was with her back looking like it had a lump on it just out of picture.
Not sure what I can do about the black strapsTo me, the black straps are very distracting. This means my eyes won't stay put on her face. Even when I try to look at her eyes, which is where they should stick, they are called by the black straps. Anything that contrasts with the subject and is outside the point of interest (eyes with a portrait) should be subdued enough not to distract.
Not sure what I can do about the black straps
Bet you could remove them
In PP of course
Not bad but the speckled skin erks me and I will send you the Bill for the editI tried removing them but I wouldn't post here since your profile states NO editing...
Well, I'm old enough to suffer your anger if it bugs you that I do, so here is my version.
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Not bad but the speckled skin erks me and I will send you the Bill for the edit
Ok this is a candid shot not posed and using only natural light....