Hello Virginia Abra,
This shot has many good points for clarity and exposure,
some good points for interest and cropping
and a not so good for something very important in this
case and that could be so simply corrected: the DoF.
The depth of field is so narrow that it give the picture no
anchoring point to the viewer's eye. This is a normal con-
sequence to the ƒ3,3 you have chosen at capture. In a take
like this, ƒ11 or ƒ16 are values you should consider.
Have a good day…