The think that takes the most away from it, for me, is that you are not looking down the center of the hallway. Perspective is too far to the right and it makes all the lines just a little off. You can get the left wall straight, but the sign and the lines in the ceiling are off.
I pulled it into LR5 and clicked on "Full" in the Perspective Correction section and it cleans up the lines, but it still looks a little off. I can't tell you how many times I've taken a photo like this and gotten home to find that all I needed to do was step 3 inches to the left or right to make it "right", but from where I stood it looks off balance. I do this shooting at the front of buildings too, standing inches off center.
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I like your rendition. But, what do I know? :disturbed::cower:
wth did I do wrong. it only gave 4.7/10..why? I only gave 4 on 4 criteria. the rest were 5's. why 4.7/10?
No I think the sign should be a bit brihter but the edges just a bit darker so the eye leads right to the middle. the tone on the sign seems darkened as well. truthfully, im just nitpicking...do this and do that. I think the photo is a very nice feel good image. its simple and just works. theres a lot of good energy in it and I like the long focal length that gave it compression and depth.
No I think the sign should be a bit brihter but the edges just a bit darker so the eye leads right to the middle. the tone on the sign seems darkened as well. truthfully, im just nitpicking...do this and do that. I think the photo is a very nice feel good image. its simple and just works. theres a lot of good energy in it and I like the long focal length that gave it compression and depth.