Looking for critique on this photo

[DraganDL]

Good! The "inversion" of the table's tone of has really added to the overall contrast and the "feel" of the photo.:applouse:

 

[Dave_W]

Is this more what you are thinking.

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I like this one much more than the first. It seems less "noisy" and more to the point.

 

[Krs_2007]

Thanks Dave