I think you did pretty good! But I agree with my friend HF, I like his version better! I actually like the tie left that way. It gives it a more natural and less staged effect! All in all great job!
Your self portrait. Strangely enough, it looks just like you. Yup, good job, and yes, the cropped version by Fish looks better. And yes, your tie IS askew.
Hi, I really like the original - looks like a subtle vintage look IMO! adds a kind of relaxing and friendly mood.
I hope this doesn't annoy you but I had a little fiddle, crop, contrast, colours and airbrush (was bored & need to practice) this was my result. - I'm not saying I like what i've done but it does look alot different to the original. I'm Not a fan of airbrushing, but some people are.