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Lawrence

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I like this composition very much. Just as a minor critique, I would have preferred to have her head tilted to her left by about 10 degrees and I would have liked to had you one step up on a ladder or stool and I would have liked her lipstick to have matched her sweater, but then I am just a picky old man.


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RON_RIP

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I'm an immigrant from Africa so the skin is only so thick.

What exactly does that have to do with my revisions? And I agree with Don that her hair is glorious and I think the sweater looks good with her hair color and skin tone.


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Lawrence

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more hair ... and if you look closely she also has lovely eyes.


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Lawrence

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Not your monitor- my bad processing.

I could show you another right here if you want - this taken in backlight and is in the garden - no backdrop.

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RON_RIP

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Now that's what I'm talking about! And actually I knew it was not my monitor but I was raised up to be polite.
This young lady has a very expressive face and you are capturing her different moods excellently. Happy also to see you experimenting with different lighting possibilities. I think in time best lighting solutions will come to you automatically.


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