I decided to play around with it a little. Came up with this. I think I may like it better than the original, but not sure. It does have a certain simplicity to it.
Was out birding in the Rondeau, Ontario area and stopped in at Keith McLean Conservation Area to see if there were any shore birds around of which we did not find much but the Lotus Ponds had just a few blooms left for the year and I managed to capture this shot with my Nikon z50 and Sigma 100-400mm