Need a little feedback on this one - dog jumping

Mike FM

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The red bar doesn't bother me, I think it's the composition. The dog feels like its coming from right to left, but the rest of the scene reads left to right. I think maybe if it were shot from a lower angle showing more sky. The sloped hill is too...busy. The dog needs to be isolated more and I think if the rest of the scene is simplified, the red bar becomes more interesting.
 
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