Being a newbie myself, I'm not really in a position to offer a critique of this shot. I just know I really like it. Nice work.View attachment 166359This is not retouched or cropped. My lens has a stripped out threaded hole and had to rest on top of car. It was a D5200 with a 400mm f/3.5 and stacked tcs (1.4 and 2x)
You could try live view for focusing. Use the + button to zoom in on the screen for detailed manual focusing.It is soft. When I tap a new threaded hole and can use a tripod I should be in business. I don't think my eyesight is good enough to really focus in tight.