Innocence

Peekcha

New member
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Nikon D90
1/40 s
F 5.6
Manual exposure

Sb-24 off camera
1/4 power
Gary Fong full cloud

I'm working on a project to put together a collage of my son's photos with a black and white theme.

Critique and comments welcome.
 

Rick M

Senior Member
My only thought here would be that with this composition, the majority of the empty space should be to the left instead of the right. I think verticle would have been better.
 

Peekcha

New member
The shot was originally taken in portrait orientation and had too much background distraction. Thus how I cropped it in such manner. But now looking back at it , there is a bit of dead space.

Thanks guys.
 
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