We have a friend whose daughter hates being photographed but thanks to the flip screen I was able to take several shots without her knowing. When she saw the results she said that for the first time she liked herself in photos.
Nice girl. But, you should have taken greater care about these white "stripes" (door frame) not intrude that much. In the second one, the light from the ceiling is "seating" on the girl's forehead. These problems can be eliminated using photoshop...
I must admit that I had hoped that after she had seen these photos (taken as I said without her knowing ) that she would agree to coming to our studio but she declined. It is a shame as she is so natural and would make an ideal subject.