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I was going for a prominent display of the aggressive front end with the train tracks leading the viewer to the shot. As far as B&W, I don't know what there is to go for.
Critique what you see could be improved.
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I was going for a prominent display of the aggressive front end with the train tracks leading the viewer to the shot. As far as B&W, I don't know what there is to go for.
Critique what you see could be improved.
I think you likely want feedback as opposed to critique, but if you want the 12 point grading, I can back up and add it.
The car itself looks fine and the idea of the setting more or less works. It's a bit busy with a few distractions, like the tower and pole in the background. The blurred vegetation in the foreground is not pleasing. I think the arrangement and point of view could be adjusted to take better advantage of the natural framing of the bridge.
I like the concept.
The car itself looks fine and the idea of the setting more or less works. It's a bit busy with a few distractions, like the tower and pole in the background. The blurred vegetation in the foreground is not pleasing. I think the arrangement and point of view could be adjusted to take better advantage of the natural framing of the bridge.
I like the concept.