Gorgeous portrait...except for that shiny spot near the top of her head. That's the only thing that I can see that I would change. Other than that........stunning photo.
Thanks Jack.
The light leak from the flash on head was done intentionally.
I also have a picture of her without it but I like the emphasis of the light wrapping around her and also the effect of the light leak.
Im really impressed on the performance of the big (6 ft) reflective umbrella. The light was distributed evenly even though Im standing in front of the model.