“The Wall “

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Pic4me

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This is a shot that caught my eye. It was about 30 min before sunset, and the light was creeping in this ally and on “The Wall” ….Does it work?

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Rick M

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Nice shot and I think you captured it well. Might want to try and tone down the highlight in the sky. Maybe crop out some of the bottom and left side.
 
ohkphoto

ohkphoto

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Pic4me said:
This is a shot that caught my eye. It was about 30 min before sunset, and the light was creeping in this ally and on “The Wall” ….Does it work?

F/20
1/80 sec
Iso-200
Aperture priority


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I do like this photo and believe it has possibilities. Rick's suggestions about cropping and toning down the sky is perfect. also, this is a perfect scenario for HDR. . . even 3 bracketed shots would have helped to bring some detail back to the shadows. As it is, I would definitely crop out the darkest areas on the bottom and left so that the eye is drawn to the "traveling" shadow on the wall.

Keep up the good work!
 
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Vincent

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The idea is perfect, the shot is good.

Somewhere I miss something, always difficult to find though, .. a splash of colour, the shade covering a bit of "The wall".
I guess that makes a picture perfect, lots of patience to get the light just right and adding some elements creatively (e.g. asking someone to park their car there).
 
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