I think Photoshop blur are to visible. Doesn't look right. And me personally, would NOT change a whole lot, from the first image. That image was the best, looking at these other edits, and I dont think it was a bad image.
My point was not to make you edit a lot in this picture, but to give an idea about what to look for NEXT time. Where to take the picture. For me, it says family pic with the framed pictures behind them, I wouldnt wanna shoot a studio-like image, for this occasion... Try thinking about the surroundings indoors, as you do with outdoors. Outdoors you dont crop of the tree or something else, instead you makes it part of the composition, the best way possible. Its the same inside, the furnitures and framed images can improve an image, telling a story about where this image was taken.
The people looks good in the composition, imo, and right part of the image looks good for background. Imo.