I've been learning photography for about a year and a half now and off-camera flash is something new to me. Last week I had the opportunity to photograph my first model, who is a cosplayer and wanted some nice photos to submit to a cosplay group. The character she is dressed as is called Starfire. There are about 90 images in total that I am pleased with and I have included a handful here (Two have had the background removed) I used 2 shoot-through umbrellas with 2 speedlights which I did adjust from time to time. Unfortunately the room we were in was small so some of the full body shots were taken at wide angles like 16mm which I know distorts the body and is not flattering! She wanted her skin made slightly orange like her character and her eyes to be green. 
What do you guys think for a first attempt? Any comments?
			
			What do you guys think for a first attempt? Any comments?
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