The little girl is adorable, and that's a very nice picture of her.
The second picture, of the bride, not so much. Looks like you've run afoul of a similar principle to what I've discovered trying and learning to take
boudoir/pinup style pictures of my wife, viz., that it is very unflattering to photograph a woman from an angle where her hips/legs/feet are more toward the camera than her head/shoulders. It makes her hips/butt look fat. Her figure would have looked much better, with a higher camera angle; and that would also have helped prevent the lower part of her face from being hidden by her shoulder.