I like the shot but if it were mine, I'd crop it hard to remove the white elements on the right side of the frame; they're powerful distracting.
This is a quick and dirty idea of what I mean. I'm not totally happy with it, but it moves the subject off center and more in accord with compositional guidelines and removes some of the distraction. I've also clipped her fingers and that's a big no-no in my book...
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