First, get rid of the watermark. My eye seems to always wander down to it. I like the fact that it's a candid shot. But it's very soft. Not in sharp focus which may be because of the focus mode you're using. Also the highlights in the background are very blown out. Again probably because of the metering mode you're using. I like the natural lighting and how it lies on him. But overall the shot is just a shot. Nothing real exciting about it. What's the camera/lense you used?