I will try to improve in the future.nice but the square window light reflection in her eyes is a little distracting.
What post-processing software are you using?
There is a program you might want to look at... Portrait Professional Pro... It basically maps the face and all its features... and then allows you to edit the particular features. The eye feature sees and maps the lights in the eye, and allows to change/delete/add them... She's a beautiful child and the pic is really strong... the eye lights are keeping that image from being a 12 on a scale of 10...