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Dsobo

Senior Member
Trying to learn and gain much knowledge from the pros, getting better but still need improvement.
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egosbar

Senior Member
looks a little overexposed and slightly oversaturated on my monitor , id also probably look at cropping so you only get the little plant and just some of the rock and a lot less grass, in fact id crop all the grass
the rocks distract from the bird as they are bright , id also run a grad filter over the rocks
love it if you cropped that way and posted back , i usually copy and try to see if it works but i see you have it blocked
 

egosbar

Senior Member
i say the above after just finishing creative live art wolfe class lol , im 100 percent sure he would say the same about the crop
 

Moab Man

Senior Member
Over-exposed, over-saturated, and white balance. Like the composition. Depending on how much detail was captured I might even crop in a bit tighter on the bird if there is greater detail to be shown.

Not a bad shot, keep shooting and welcome.
 

Eyelight

Senior Member
Like the shot. As is, it has kind of a unique quality.

I would be curious the result if you did nothing but reduce the green and/or yellow saturation.
 

wornish

Senior Member
Nice shot.
I agree with the comments on here about the overexposure and white balance.
I think it would be better cropped tighter on the bird but your composition works too.


Overall good job.
 

BackdoorArts

Senior Member
I'm with MoabMan. I'd also add a little soft and oversharpened/overstructured when viewed at full size. And just to be thorough, it's a Great Blue Heron, not a crane (from the photo filename). ;)

It can be tempting to boost saturation to make colors pop, so be careful, particularly with reds and greens. Also learn what you can do to highlight your subject a little more, like with a very subtle vignette centered on the subject - not just the basic darken/lighten edges type. The LR Radial Filter tool is great for that.
 
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