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    critique welcome please - bride

    which one do you prefer

    like too start a poll but not sure how


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                            Re: critique welcome please - bride

                            I like them both for different reasons. The first, I like the colors. The second, I like as an artistic image.

                            It may not be any help, but I don't have a preference one over the other as they are not competing against each other for me.
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                            Re: critique welcome please - bride

                            sort of competing for me im in the same boat i guess

                            ill rephrase then which one would you put in a portfolio , im thinking the black and white as i dont do many but this one works
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                            Re: critique welcome please - bride

                            critique welcome please   -  bride
                            I think a touch of shadows and back lighting brings it out. You first picture is nice.

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                            Re: critique welcome please - bride

                            mmm maybe , possibly a bit much for my liking but i can see what you mean , can you try the opacity at 50% seems you have the psd done please
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                            Re: critique welcome please - bride

                            Quote Originally Posted by egosbar View Post

                            ill rephrase then which one would you put in a portfolio , im thinking the black and white as i dont do many but this one works
                            Now that is a different question. Absolutely, add the black and white then.
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                            i agree mate thanks
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                            Re: critique welcome please - bride

                            I don't mind the first one.... however, if I was going to be picky.....

                            I would personally give the image more room to breathe - so to speak. For mine it is a little too tightly cropped.

                            The second, I would ease up on the white vignette. Again for mine, with Vignette, a little goes a looooooong way and that is double for white vignette.
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                            Re: critique welcome please - bride

                            i did want her too fill the frame , ill have a look at the vignette i sort of wanted it dreamy
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                            why does it look rough , when you click on it and open the image here its more what it looks like in ps
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