Looking for feedback on my website (Logo)

ShaggyRS6

Senior Member
Hi all,

I paid some money to an art student to come up with a logo for my website. It was not a lot, well $150, and she gave me the proofs and a water mark. I'm not sure I like it though, at the time I thought I did, not I look at it im not so sure. maybe its the images I am using rather than the logo.

What do you guys and girls think?

Lee Shand Photography
 

hark

Administrator
Staff member
Super Mod
I like the font, but the aperture reminds me of the head of a bolt rather than aperture blades.
 

hark

Administrator
Staff member
Super Mod
Looking at it a little more and to be more specific, usually a diagram of an aperture is round on its outside like these images.

https://www.google.com/search?q=ape...mOoS3yASLoIKoCw&ved=0CBwQsAQ&biw=1280&bih=605

This particular image reminds me of what your image might be trying to replicate (image comes from this web site):

aperture_blades_by_mitchal26-d6kh3uj.png

This is just my own personal opinion...others may like your watermark, Lee. Wait and see what other members say. ;)
 

FastGlass

Senior Member
I like it the way it is. Simple. Although I would change some wording in your presentation. First sentence, drop the "at a price" at the end of the sentence. Sounds a bit cheesey.
Also drop the second sentence. Makes you sound like your not professional and not ready. Just my opinion. Other than that looks good.
 

dh photography

Senior Member
I don't mind the logo at all. Might be a tad better if it wasn't as off center with the "blades", but not bad as it is. However; I'm not a big fan of the font of your name. Something just a little more modern might really pop better. I'd also pull the "Photography" text down away from your name about an 1/8" or so. Just enough to give it a little separation instead seeming just thrown up there.

A couple little tweaks weak sand you've got a winner.
 

singlerosa_RIP

Senior Member
Nice site with great photos. I'd change these lines from what you do best:

[h=3]I only ever take one client at any time.[/h]"ever" is redundant
[h=3]You will find yourself saving hundred's of dollars![/h]
hundreds, not hundred's. Plus, you already said you were cheap in the previous paragraph.

Good luck.
 

ShaggyRS6

Senior Member
Slightly off topic, I made some changes to my blog that allows you to more easily see comments and view them.

I also added a review of the Black Rapid DR-1 system
 
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