Why the expanding waistline?
- Thread starter canuck257
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Oh Boy! That's dangerous! I guess for once I should be thankful for my wife's laziness. Nice shot!
The lighting and exposure are great, but I'd bring the products closer together. The first shot looks like it's falling off the back edge.
I agree. The closer to my mouth the better.
This reminds me. I still have some leftover blueberry pound cake downstairs in the kitchen.:encouragement:
Crispix396
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Both photos.. Drop your angle, get down at the foods level. Imagine you are a 5 year old, you just stood up on the chair and you can finally see the whole table of food and you eye the first piece you are going to steal before grandma comes back in the room.
Photo one, the loaf is there but its also kinda boring. Since the biscuits are torn, and it has some varying textures to them. Maybe turn it around so the freshly torn edge is close to the camera, and have the loaf right behind it. The depth makes it interesting
Photo two. same general idea. the focus of this photo is "here is the cake" when in reality, you want to say "here is the first delicious bite you're about to take"..
Photo one, the loaf is there but its also kinda boring. Since the biscuits are torn, and it has some varying textures to them. Maybe turn it around so the freshly torn edge is close to the camera, and have the loaf right behind it. The depth makes it interesting
Photo two. same general idea. the focus of this photo is "here is the cake" when in reality, you want to say "here is the first delicious bite you're about to take"..
Crispix396
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also both cooling racks are squares, shoot it from an angle that makes them diamonds, or less "perfect". When people see perfect squares, the minds first thought it to find the imperfections. When you show a different perspective where it is not perfect, you lose that critique.