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<blockquote data-quote="Horoscope Fish" data-source="post: 649488" data-attributes="member: 13090"><p>Well, by way of critique the first thing I noticed is the background, at the top of the frame specifically, is a huge distraction that weakens the shot for two reasons: 1. The top edge is, by far, the brightest part of the shot which competes strongly with your subject and, 2. There's a whooooole lot of "edge noise" being created by the buildings and trees right on top of the subject's head. When shooting portraits I like to keep the subject's head in a "clean space"; meaning without any distracting elements overlapping with, or crowding, the head/face of the subject. The shot also looks soft to me and I think it could stand some cropping.</p><p></p><p>I'm not saying it's a bad shot, I'm saying it could be improved upon.</p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="Horoscope Fish, post: 649488, member: 13090"] Well, by way of critique the first thing I noticed is the background, at the top of the frame specifically, is a huge distraction that weakens the shot for two reasons: 1. The top edge is, by far, the brightest part of the shot which competes strongly with your subject and, 2. There's a whooooole lot of "edge noise" being created by the buildings and trees right on top of the subject's head. When shooting portraits I like to keep the subject's head in a "clean space"; meaning without any distracting elements overlapping with, or crowding, the head/face of the subject. The shot also looks soft to me and I think it could stand some cropping. I'm not saying it's a bad shot, I'm saying it could be improved upon. [/QUOTE]
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