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Message: <blockquote data-quote="ohkphoto" data-source="post: 76149" data-attributes="member: 1573">If you're referring to the "jazzing up", then yes, I like the effect on the street letters and the green is nice and vibrant.I also like the use of a wide angle and the vanishing point.In terms of technique, composition and impact, the photo needs a little more "oomph".  The "air conditioner" on the building wall is a distraction and so are the dark shadows.  This scene would have been a good candidate for HDR.  So even though you have nice perspective and a great vanishing point, I find myself pulled to different parts of the scene and looking for a center.I would give this photo a 9/12 (-1 for impact, -1 for creativity and -1 for technique) IMHOA very nice photo with lots of potential.  Keep up the good work.</blockquote>