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<blockquote data-quote="Eye-level" data-source="post: 80374" data-attributes="member: 6548"><p>That is to abstract. We don't know what we are supposed to be looking at. The clouds? Sure they look good but how do they relate to the composition? Is it weak or is it strong? Is that the subject? That first one has this huge hard shadow that is just harsh against the sky...yes lots of drama but such a sharp note! If you would have shot that at sunrise it would be a drastically different snap!</p><p></p><p>Some different angles and different compositions playing with how the light is hitting the landscape would have served you well here.</p><p></p><p>The subject is indeed there you just haven't brought all the elements of light and composition and such to bear in order to define the snap decisively.</p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="Eye-level, post: 80374, member: 6548"] That is to abstract. We don't know what we are supposed to be looking at. The clouds? Sure they look good but how do they relate to the composition? Is it weak or is it strong? Is that the subject? That first one has this huge hard shadow that is just harsh against the sky...yes lots of drama but such a sharp note! If you would have shot that at sunrise it would be a drastically different snap! Some different angles and different compositions playing with how the light is hitting the landscape would have served you well here. The subject is indeed there you just haven't brought all the elements of light and composition and such to bear in order to define the snap decisively. [/QUOTE]
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