suburban shoot

[kym.dinh]

Hey everyone.
This is my 2nd shoot i have done.
I want to see what i can improve on.
I must also add on, this is starting to become addicting lol .

 

[Lawrence]

Focus seems a bit soft. Which part of him are you focusing on?
His skin tone is also a bit too red on my monitor - for my liking anyway.
I like the poses.

 

[kym.dinh]

Focus seems a bit soft. Which part of him are you focusing on?
His skin tone is also a bit too red on my monitor - for my liking anyway.
I like the poses.

Thank you. I was focusing on his face .
Im gonna try to reedit it tonight to correct yhe skintone. Thank you for your input.