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<blockquote data-quote="wud" data-source="post: 143645" data-attributes="member: 13578">Its very hard to give critique when there are so many pictures, and its on another site. But - I notice that you tend to have too much air on top of the persons heads, you gotta crop that out. And you will have to make more attention on the background, maybe use an aperture which can blur the background out a little bit. Oh, and there is one picture where the bride lowers her head because the girl she is standing with, are lower - thats not so good, makes the bride look a little weird <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite1" alt=":)" title="Smile&nbsp; &nbsp; :)" loading="lazy" data-shortname=":)" /> When you make your pictures black and white (or, you use a brownish tone), I think you are lacking some contrast. They look a little too flat, imo. Like the pictures where the bride and groom look at each other and smile. And you got the sharpness and the lights, you'll be good with more practice!</blockquote>

[QUOTE="wud, post: 143645, member: 13578"] Its very hard to give critique when there are so many pictures, and its on another site. But - I notice that you tend to have too much air on top of the persons heads, you gotta crop that out. And you will have to make more attention on the background, maybe use an aperture which can blur the background out a little bit. Oh, and there is one picture where the bride lowers her head because the girl she is standing with, are lower - thats not so good, makes the bride look a little weird :) When you make your pictures black and white (or, you use a brownish tone), I think you are lacking some contrast. They look a little too flat, imo. Like the pictures where the bride and groom look at each other and smile. And you got the sharpness and the lights, you'll be good with more practice! [/QUOTE]

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