No probs, try to be aware of the background during your shoot, in this case, the red coat guy & the park in general is quite distracting. It's more of a park with a girl in it. Try the idea indoors with a plain background, concentrate on the model a little more.
The images don't look sharp but I can't tell because when clicking on them they don't enlarge. For me they have to much saturation, contrast and the crops are to tight. I also agree with Gorf. The backgrounds are distracting. Even the two without the red jacket person. The road the sign post pulls my attention away from her.
Awesome. Im going do a follow up rendition of this with the new advice. Also my apologies on image quality it was a screen shot I took of my uploaded picture on fb.
Thanks gorf and fastglass.
I'm happy you didn't mind the critique & look forward to the new shots.
Talk to the model about the shoot, it's supposed to be "See no evil" etc. Maybe a shocked, laughing or surprised expression may work. Also use a tripod so that you don't shift your position.
It looks to me like you're trying to take off on the classic three monkeys, “See no evil; Hear no evil; Speak no evil”, but her hands in the second picture don't look like they're properly aligned to be covering her ears. In fact, it really doesn't look much at all like a covering one's ears pose, so much as a relaxing with one's hands on the back of one's head pose.