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<blockquote data-quote="Kodiak" data-source="post: 181862" data-attributes="member: 15426">re: #40•I like the colourful background that is nevertheless much too sharp and its texture too close and too visible… otherwise, quite an improvement.The subject is not is focus in its entire length. The metal parts and the wood work are beautiful features and should be fully appreciated.The richness of colours and tones are all light dependant! Although the blue specular reflection is a good idea and well done, the rest of the picture is not well served by the chosen main light that is both at a poor angle to the scene and throwing nasty shadows where the eye would not expect them. Uncomfortable!A last thing for today on this picture is the layout. On this take, the cork is anobstacle to the corkscrew, visually speaking! Find it a place behind the screw.Have a good day…</blockquote>

[QUOTE="Kodiak, post: 181862, member: 15426"] re: #40 • I like the colourful [B]background[/B] that is nevertheless much too sharp and its texture too close and too visible… otherwise, quite an improvement. The [B]subject[/B] is not is focus in its entire length. The metal parts and the wood work are beautiful features and should be fully appreciated. The richness of colours and tones are all [B]light [/B]dependant! Although the blue specular reflection is a good idea and well done, the rest of the picture is not well served by the chosen main light that is both at a poor angle to the scene and throwing nasty shadows where the eye would not expect them. Uncomfortable! A last thing for today on this picture is the [B]layout[/B]. On this take, the cork is an obstacle to the corkscrew, visually speaking! Find it a place behind the screw. Have a good day… [/QUOTE]

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