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<blockquote data-quote="crycocyon" data-source="post: 125226" data-attributes="member: 13076">She has both engaging eyes and an engaging smile. It almost seems more like a candid shot rather than a portrait because her eyes are towards the camera but her head is nearly straight ahead, not turned that much to the camera. Also, it looks almost like she's leaning back a bit. The backward tilt of the head gives a more carefree pose, but I would consider having her head tilted towards the camera and try having her not looking right at the lens but looking at you or just above the camera. The bright highlight in the top right corner is a bit distracting. What you want to do, even with the out of focus background, is get her with a more uniform background. If you moved to the right just a bit, then the brown background would be filling that top right corner and it wouldn't take much of a move on your part to achieve that. Here's my version...[ATTACH]29898[/ATTACH]</blockquote>

[QUOTE="crycocyon, post: 125226, member: 13076"] She has both engaging eyes and an engaging smile. It almost seems more like a candid shot rather than a portrait because her eyes are towards the camera but her head is nearly straight ahead, not turned that much to the camera. Also, it looks almost like she's leaning back a bit. The backward tilt of the head gives a more carefree pose, but I would consider having her head tilted towards the camera and try having her not looking right at the lens but looking at you or just above the camera. The bright highlight in the top right corner is a bit distracting. What you want to do, even with the out of focus background, is get her with a more uniform background. If you moved to the right just a bit, then the brown background would be filling that top right corner and it wouldn't take much of a move on your part to achieve that. Here's my version... [ATTACH=CONFIG]29898._xfImport[/ATTACH] [/QUOTE]

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