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<blockquote data-quote="Marcel" data-source="post: 162032" data-attributes="member: 3903"><p>Glenn, I think your shot could be greatly improved just by cropping. I would bring the seam of her right shoulder just in the corner and would rotate the crop to have an imaginary line going right across the lower left corner and the right upper corner go through the middle of her nose and left eye. This would give the shot more dynamic feel and a little bit of mischief in her look. If you want, I could PM you what I mean or post it here since you've clearly indicated that you DON'T want your shots edited.</p><p></p><p>As far as the lighting goes, I would have liked to see an hair light and would have made the background a little darker.</p><p></p><p></p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="Marcel, post: 162032, member: 3903"] Glenn, I think your shot could be greatly improved just by cropping. I would bring the seam of her right shoulder just in the corner and would rotate the crop to have an imaginary line going right across the lower left corner and the right upper corner go through the middle of her nose and left eye. This would give the shot more dynamic feel and a little bit of mischief in her look. If you want, I could PM you what I mean or post it here since you've clearly indicated that you DON'T want your shots edited. As far as the lighting goes, I would have liked to see an hair light and would have made the background a little darker. [/QUOTE]
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