I get what you're trying to do with this image and I think it has a lot of potential. However, the bulk of the beauty inherent to this type of composition is the symmetry you build into it. That said, I think this would make a more compelling composition if you re-shoot this with more of an exacting slice directly on the midline of the pouches' face.
Nevertheless, the image is nice and sharp, something I have a tough time doing with my dog. Every time I point the camera at my boxer Penny, she takes off in the opposite direction. I blame my wife and her love of the flash that has completely ruined my dog.
