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<blockquote data-quote="fotojack" data-source="post: 124346" data-attributes="member: 16"><p>Personally, I see nothing wrong with these shots, other than some distracting elements in the photos themselves, AND....they are both ever so slightly out of focus. Perhaps soft would be a better word for it. Since I could see no EXIF data, I can't tell what mode you shot them in. If she was moving, Shutter Mode would have been the preferred method, at around 1/250th or higher. What aperture was used? ISO? What lens? Did you set White Balance to the lighting in the studio? This information is important to determine what needs to be addressed by way of critique.</p><p></p><p>By the way, she's a cutie, and I love the look of determination on her face. <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite1" alt=":)" title="Smile :)" loading="lazy" data-shortname=":)" /> Having been in the martial arts myself many moons ago, I know what's she going through. <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite1" alt=":)" title="Smile :)" loading="lazy" data-shortname=":)" /></p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="fotojack, post: 124346, member: 16"] Personally, I see nothing wrong with these shots, other than some distracting elements in the photos themselves, AND....they are both ever so slightly out of focus. Perhaps soft would be a better word for it. Since I could see no EXIF data, I can't tell what mode you shot them in. If she was moving, Shutter Mode would have been the preferred method, at around 1/250th or higher. What aperture was used? ISO? What lens? Did you set White Balance to the lighting in the studio? This information is important to determine what needs to be addressed by way of critique. By the way, she's a cutie, and I love the look of determination on her face. :) Having been in the martial arts myself many moons ago, I know what's she going through. :) [/QUOTE]
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