You have nice collors, and good moments, but I don't know if I would choose the wide image, I think I would bring the action of the frontmen closer. Now you have the bassplayer who is cut in two by the mic and in Photo1 the trumpet player and Photo 2 the guitarist are to close to the edge. Maybe I'm just to strict and to hard looking for mistakes I make myself. In overall images I find it hard to get everyone right in the pic, and most of the time they end up cropped or in the bin. On what focal length are these made?