Hello everyone,
Somewhere in April I bought Tokina 11-16 f2.8 and soon after I made some night shots without planing, the Moon was high in the sky, there is light pollution everywhere, but somehow I was satisfied with results. These are some of my shots:

I decided to plan it next time and 15. of July was my choice for Milky Way because there is no Moon, so I went to the same place with prepared coordinates and azimuth, but I forgot that at this time of the year there is corn almost 2 meters high.
I finally found another place which is much better, but then I forgot how scary it can be when there is no Moon, with all wild animals making strange noise around me.
All in all I made some shots of Milky Way, but I am not satisfied. Here is one of my shots, raw file and processed one:

I would like to know what you think about it, is the original photo too faint, or my editing technique needs improvement?
Somewhere in April I bought Tokina 11-16 f2.8 and soon after I made some night shots without planing, the Moon was high in the sky, there is light pollution everywhere, but somehow I was satisfied with results. These are some of my shots:


I decided to plan it next time and 15. of July was my choice for Milky Way because there is no Moon, so I went to the same place with prepared coordinates and azimuth, but I forgot that at this time of the year there is corn almost 2 meters high.
I finally found another place which is much better, but then I forgot how scary it can be when there is no Moon, with all wild animals making strange noise around me.
All in all I made some shots of Milky Way, but I am not satisfied. Here is one of my shots, raw file and processed one:


I would like to know what you think about it, is the original photo too faint, or my editing technique needs improvement?