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<blockquote data-quote="Horoscope Fish" data-source="post: 162719" data-attributes="member: 13090"><p>Overall a very nice and visually interesting shot. The reflection in the water elevates this from looking too "snap-shotesque" to me. It could be that it's my monitor but the shot DOES look a little over-saturated to me. I also think the vignetting needs to go, it's really not adding anything that I see. I'd also like to see the horizon a little less centered in the frame, I'm thinking a little off the bottom since the clouds/sky do look nice; not so much as to lose the reflection in the water, though; just "tweak". Horizon is also ever so slightly crooked. Speaking of tweaks I'd also think about 'shopping out the mooring post on the left.</p><p></p><p><strong>Center of Interest</strong>: High marks. Nice subject matter!</p><p><strong>Color Balance</strong>: Balance seems spot on, a bit oversaturated to MY eye, but this could be a technology thing.</p><p><strong>Storytelling</strong>: Oh hell yes... I really want to know more about this boat, who's on it, where are they going, where have they been. Can we have lunch on your boat??</p><p><strong>Style, </strong><strong>Subject Matter, </strong><strong>Technical excellence</strong>, <strong>Technique</strong>, <strong>Impact</strong>: All good. </p><p><strong>Creativity</strong>: Good. It was a "found" shot and nicely done but I can't really go four or five stars on this point.</p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="Horoscope Fish, post: 162719, member: 13090"] Overall a very nice and visually interesting shot. The reflection in the water elevates this from looking too "snap-shotesque" to me. It could be that it's my monitor but the shot DOES look a little over-saturated to me. I also think the vignetting needs to go, it's really not adding anything that I see. I'd also like to see the horizon a little less centered in the frame, I'm thinking a little off the bottom since the clouds/sky do look nice; not so much as to lose the reflection in the water, though; just "tweak". Horizon is also ever so slightly crooked. Speaking of tweaks I'd also think about 'shopping out the mooring post on the left. [B]Center of Interest[/B]: High marks. Nice subject matter! [B]Color Balance[/B]: Balance seems spot on, a bit oversaturated to MY eye, but this could be a technology thing. [B]Storytelling[/B]: Oh hell yes... I really want to know more about this boat, who's on it, where are they going, where have they been. Can we have lunch on your boat?? [B]Style, [/B][B]Subject Matter, [/B][B]Technical excellence[/B], [B]Technique[/B], [B]Impact[/B]: All good. [B]Creativity[/B]: Good. It was a "found" shot and nicely done but I can't really go four or five stars on this point. [/QUOTE]
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