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<blockquote data-quote="Rick M" data-source="post: 63870" data-attributes="member: 4399">Jeremy,It would help if you posted the exif data.This is a nice shot, you really nailed the DoF and focus, nice job!I would say this rates an 8/12.Afew things that caught my eye,-1 Composition. Even though it is not a landscape, the fence seems to create a horizon and it looks like the shot is cut in half. I think I would crop out more of the bottom of the fence, say above the cross-rail. Good job keeping the bird off center.-1 Story. It's a bird on a fence. Good technique but no story. (this is a hit on most of my shots too!)-1 Impact. Besides the technical stuff, there's really nothing here to say wow about.-1 Creativity. It a bird on a fence. I think it would be a bit more interesting if the bird were facing us. I think the best take-away from this shot is the DoF and focus control, excellent job on those elements!Rick</blockquote>

[QUOTE="Rick M, post: 63870, member: 4399"] Jeremy, It would help if you posted the exif data. This is a nice shot, you really nailed the DoF and focus, nice job! I would say this rates an 8/12. Afew things that caught my eye, -1 Composition. Even though it is not a landscape, the fence seems to create a horizon and it looks like the shot is cut in half. I think I would crop out more of the bottom of the fence, say above the cross-rail. Good job keeping the bird off center. -1 Story. It's a bird on a fence. Good technique but no story. (this is a hit on most of my shots too!) -1 Impact. Besides the technical stuff, there's really nothing here to say wow about. -1 Creativity. It a bird on a fence. I think it would be a bit more interesting if the bird were facing us. I think the best take-away from this shot is the DoF and focus control, excellent job on those elements! Rick [/QUOTE]

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