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Left Stranded (amateur short movie)
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<blockquote data-quote="Moab Man" data-source="post: 517550" data-attributes="member: 11881"><p>I liked it a lot right up to the torn up note being washed away. You lost me after that, although I did watch it to the end. I would have loved for this story to have ended after the note washes away and a camera shot shows her half way away from the camera walking away and the screen goes dark. Until the point I mentioned where you lost me, I was really invested in the character and what was causing the sense of loss. The dramatic scary change just didn't do it for me. </p><p></p><p>Your camera work was really nice. Most impressed without however you pulled it off to have no people in the shots anywhere that I saw.</p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="Moab Man, post: 517550, member: 11881"] I liked it a lot right up to the torn up note being washed away. You lost me after that, although I did watch it to the end. I would have loved for this story to have ended after the note washes away and a camera shot shows her half way away from the camera walking away and the screen goes dark. Until the point I mentioned where you lost me, I was really invested in the character and what was causing the sense of loss. The dramatic scary change just didn't do it for me. Your camera work was really nice. Most impressed without however you pulled it off to have no people in the shots anywhere that I saw. [/QUOTE]
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