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<blockquote data-quote="crycocyon" data-source="post: 246267" data-attributes="member: 13076"><p>Nice image of a lovely subject. Since it is however by its nature a high key image, I would have lightened it up a bit more to give it more of an ethereal quality. Below is my version. Also I think the color balance is too far in the flesh tones. Since she is looking down, lighting helps to bring out the color in the eyes, and the eyes in general. Composition is good although I trimmed the left off a bit. The pose is very thoughtful but the way that she has her hands around her chin and neck seems a bit tight (almost like a choke) and without the smile it implies a mood less than light-hearted as a child's should be. So I can see where the comment came from about something disturbing in the photo. Generally I would instruct a model not to cover their chin. One hand lower down holding the chin and the girl looking up just a bit with a bit more of a smile would be nice, but I appreciate this particular interpretation and mood so that's a simple style preference. The hair is perfect. </p><p></p><p>[ATTACH]66712[/ATTACH]</p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="crycocyon, post: 246267, member: 13076"] Nice image of a lovely subject. Since it is however by its nature a high key image, I would have lightened it up a bit more to give it more of an ethereal quality. Below is my version. Also I think the color balance is too far in the flesh tones. Since she is looking down, lighting helps to bring out the color in the eyes, and the eyes in general. Composition is good although I trimmed the left off a bit. The pose is very thoughtful but the way that she has her hands around her chin and neck seems a bit tight (almost like a choke) and without the smile it implies a mood less than light-hearted as a child's should be. So I can see where the comment came from about something disturbing in the photo. Generally I would instruct a model not to cover their chin. One hand lower down holding the chin and the girl looking up just a bit with a bit more of a smile would be nice, but I appreciate this particular interpretation and mood so that's a simple style preference. The hair is perfect. [ATTACH=CONFIG]66712._xfImport[/ATTACH] [/QUOTE]
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