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<blockquote data-quote="Kodiak" data-source="post: 171026" data-attributes="member: 15426">Hello John,Normally, I will look at the picture, then the text. I am possibly the only lunatic thatdoes not include &quot;keep an eye on the date&quot; in the sequence! …just happy you're posting!First picture, two points if I may:1. The rendition is a tad too flat, slightly on the dull side… the brighter band of lightcrossing the shot should be, in my eye, a tad more vivid.2. IMO, this composition should lead the observer in a perfect symmetry that may amuse the eye but here, there are no elements to support this approach. Consequently,a lack of visual dynamic is noticeable in this composition. To bring more interest to this, try to crop (2x3) the tree to the left along with some sky: nothing is more boring than a cloudless sky! The operation will take the farmer's path off centre.I would very much appreciate seeing the new version!Have a good day…</blockquote>

[QUOTE="Kodiak, post: 171026, member: 15426"] Hello John, Normally, I will look at the picture, then the text. I am possibly the only lunatic that does not include "keep an eye on the date" in the sequence! …just happy you're posting! [B]First picture[/B], two points if I may: 1. The rendition is a tad too flat, slightly on the dull side… the brighter band of light crossing the shot should be, in my eye, a tad more vivid. 2. IMO, this composition should lead the observer in a perfect symmetry that may amuse the eye but here, there are no elements to support this approach. Consequently, a lack of visual dynamic is noticeable in this composition. To bring more interest to this, try to crop (2x3) the tree to the left along with some sky: nothing is more boring than a cloudless sky! The operation will take the farmer's path off centre. I would very much appreciate seeing the new version! Have a good day… [/QUOTE]

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