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<blockquote data-quote="Kodiak" data-source="post: 174360" data-attributes="member: 15426">Hello there,What I dig is the eye catching colour composition! The picture composition is not sogood though…Your title says: &quot;Hanging flower&quot; …and that should be it! The path, which is occupying 20-25 % of the picture, is not supporting your subject but distracting from it. An optioncould have been a hand lowering the branch so that the flower would use the path asneutral background specially with the presence of shadow areas. The focus seems off.If the couple was together when the shot was taken and the guy took it, I am happy tosee that I am not the only grown man to be moved by flowers. One would think a girlwould be more sensible to such motives.Recommandation: Should you pass the same way, and the scene is about the same, tryto redo it …together, of course! Oh yeah… and please post the result!Have a good day…</blockquote>

[QUOTE="Kodiak, post: 174360, member: 15426"] Hello there, What I dig is the eye catching colour composition! The picture composition is not so good though… Your title says: "Hanging flower" …and that should be it! The path, which is occupying 20-25 % of the picture, is not supporting your subject but distracting from it. An option could have been a hand lowering the branch so that the flower would use the path as neutral background specially with the presence of shadow areas. The focus seems off. If the couple was together when the shot was taken and the guy took it, I am happy to see that I am not the only grown man to be moved by flowers. One would think a girl would be more sensible to such motives. Recommandation: Should you pass the same way, and the scene is about the same, try to redo it …together, of course! Oh yeah… and please post the result! Have a good day… [/QUOTE]

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