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<blockquote data-quote="jazzjunkie" data-source="post: 347256" data-attributes="member: 22269">on your edited shots:with the monkeys, i find the very bright green a little distracting, maybe it just needs the leaves toning down a little, or being a bit of a darker green, or maybe removing the small collection of green leaves that are very close to the monkeys head would create some space to not lead the eye diagonally away to the top left of the picture. For me, the elephant blends too easily into the background, particularly in the bottom half of the picture, maybe a touch of contrast or a bit of structure would make him pop out a bit more... I'm by no means an expert on any of these matters, and very very new to critiquing, so please take what i said lightly and with salt <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite1" alt=":)" title="Smile&nbsp; &nbsp; :)" loading="lazy" data-shortname=":)" /></blockquote>

[QUOTE="jazzjunkie, post: 347256, member: 22269"] on your edited shots: with the monkeys, i find the very bright green a little distracting, maybe it just needs the leaves toning down a little, or being a bit of a darker green, or maybe removing the small collection of green leaves that are very close to the monkeys head would create some space to not lead the eye diagonally away to the top left of the picture. For me, the elephant blends too easily into the background, particularly in the bottom half of the picture, maybe a touch of contrast or a bit of structure would make him pop out a bit more... I'm by no means an expert on any of these matters, and very very new to critiquing, so please take what i said lightly and with salt :) [/QUOTE]

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