First time sharing photos!

Hello guys, I'm a rookie level photographer, just want to get some feedbacks.
Please, dont take it easy. haha

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J-see

Senior Member
I can't say there's much for me to comment. I like the shots. Especially the style you processed (or whatever you did) the first two. Very nice.

Since nice doesn't help much, let's comment. ;) The only thing I might have done different is pulled a bit more detail out of shadows in the B&W shot. Now some dogs are almost lost in them. It doesn't need to be much; just enough to pull the bigger dog in.
 
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J-see

Senior Member
Thank you, I processed those shots using Lightroom, where I'm beginner as well, took some hours to do that, but practice is the way, isn't? :)

LR is a nice program but it takes some time to know every function and it takes even more to know how to use them well. I still discover better methods each day.

Maybe you can adjust the shadows of the third shot a bit to show more of the big dog in the B&W or lightly brush some parts using the adjustment brush and then increase the values locally. I added my comment to the first reply because I only noticed afterwards there is a seventh dog in the shot. The big one I overlooked.
 
LR is a nice program but it takes some time to know every function and it takes even more to know how to use them well. I still discover better methods each day.

Maybe you can adjust the shadows of the third shot a bit to show more of the big dog in the B&W or lightly brush some parts using the adjustment brush and then increase the values locally. I added my comment to the first reply because I only noticed afterwards there is a seventh dog in the shot. The big one I overlooked.

Yes, I'll try it, I used brush for the contrast and other adjustments in the wall and to get tha background dark.
Gonna try in the big dog.

Tkz!
 

SteveH

Senior Member
I like them! As J-See says, a bit more exposure in the B&W shot would be nice. Out of the three, the middle shot is my favourite, I think the first one is maybe cropped a bit too much at the back of the dog's head.
 

dennybeall

Senior Member
Nice. Like the first one the best. As others have said the last one could be a bit brighter to bring out some detail
In the second one - consider removing the fuzzy object behind the dog.
 
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