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<blockquote data-quote="Moab Man" data-source="post: 286255" data-attributes="member: 11881"><p>I appreciate all of the feedback.</p><p> [USER=17183]@Jonathan[/USER] [USER=12257]@Pretzel[/USER] I agree on the stiffness. My daughter was really angry and still mad at me because I had got on her last night and wow did it transfer to this morning and you can see it in her "I'm helping but I don't have to be happy about it!" I reluctantly used her because I needed to work out my lighting so I just had to deal with the angry I don't want to be here poses. </p><p></p><p>Agreed on that backdrop, looks horrible. Didn't want to break out and set up the big eight foot across backdrop. Had to settle for the closet folded sheet - I can fix that pretty easily.</p><p></p><p>I too thought I was seeing a tinge of yellow on the shoulder. It was her hair. I meticulously removed/lessoned that same yellow cast from in her neck area, but left the shoulder to see if everyone else was seeing the same as me. I was afraid I had stared at it too long and was imagining the yellow cast. </p><p></p><p>My biggest challenge, with her, is keeping her eyes open. I easily shot 50 photo's and got four with her eyes open. The rest she looked stoned or were flat closed. To get the few with her eyes opened required her opening her eyes stupid big and I would catch them on the closing blink. She can't keep her eyes open with a flash for nothing. </p><p> [USER=645]@mike[/USER]D90 I like the idea of a flower. She fiddled with her hands not knowing what to do with them and she is comfortable with me. </p><p></p><p><strong>Any thoughts on the position of her inside of the framing of the photo? I though she might need a little more space above her head and body positioned a little more to her right inside of the photo area. </strong></p><p></p><p>Again, thank you everyone for input.</p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="Moab Man, post: 286255, member: 11881"] I appreciate all of the feedback. [USER=17183]@Jonathan[/USER] [USER=12257]@Pretzel[/USER] I agree on the stiffness. My daughter was really angry and still mad at me because I had got on her last night and wow did it transfer to this morning and you can see it in her "I'm helping but I don't have to be happy about it!" I reluctantly used her because I needed to work out my lighting so I just had to deal with the angry I don't want to be here poses. Agreed on that backdrop, looks horrible. Didn't want to break out and set up the big eight foot across backdrop. Had to settle for the closet folded sheet - I can fix that pretty easily. I too thought I was seeing a tinge of yellow on the shoulder. It was her hair. I meticulously removed/lessoned that same yellow cast from in her neck area, but left the shoulder to see if everyone else was seeing the same as me. I was afraid I had stared at it too long and was imagining the yellow cast. My biggest challenge, with her, is keeping her eyes open. I easily shot 50 photo's and got four with her eyes open. The rest she looked stoned or were flat closed. To get the few with her eyes opened required her opening her eyes stupid big and I would catch them on the closing blink. She can't keep her eyes open with a flash for nothing. [USER=645]@mike[/USER]D90 I like the idea of a flower. She fiddled with her hands not knowing what to do with them and she is comfortable with me. [B]Any thoughts on the position of her inside of the framing of the photo? I though she might need a little more space above her head and body positioned a little more to her right inside of the photo area. [/B] Again, thank you everyone for input. [/QUOTE]
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