Nice - I like the first one best, is the second a little hot?
When I open the file, it appears there was a flash on camera left. I think you are right on with the toning down of the highlights comment, that might do it (for my personal taste that is). Just my $.02, I do like the images overall.Are saying this because of the pose or that the whites look a little washed out?
The thing is, if you right-click on the bottom and open it at full resolution you can make out the details in the white sweater. That said, you could probably tone down the highlights a touch if you wanted more details. there. It all depends on how white you want your whites.
tell us what you did in NIK on each of these photos.
Nice photos, and well done with the processing. When I see posts with titles like "First Nik Shots" I brace myself, because I know from personal experience it's easy to fall into the "Wow, that's a cool filter" pit. So, given that another Nik user like Don had to ask what you did in Nik with each, you know you used them properly - to enhance the shot you envisioned and not just to use a filter for the filter's sake. Nicely done.
As you explore Silver Efex Pro, make sure you expand the sliders for Brightness, Contrast and Structure. Mine did not expand on their own initially and I didn't realize there were fine tuning sliders under them for a month while I was using it, so I just don't want you to miss out (it's not that I'm seeing something that you should have used). They are what make that tool so superior to the other B&W conversion tools out there.
Yes< I did adjust the sliders to my liking. Im still exploring all NIK has to offer and 80% of the edit was done with NIK. I did use PS to dodge and burn as mentioned to DON but other than that I tried to mostly do it with NIK. Like I asked DON what is recipes and how do I get them or make them?