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<blockquote data-quote="hark" data-source="post: 215668" data-attributes="member: 13196"><p>Nice job! First of all, the forum rules only allow one photo per thread so don't be surprised when a mod jumps in here. </p><p></p><p>I like the first photo but would prefer to see it cropped by removing the left side of the photo and cropping tight to her hair. </p><p></p><p>The 2nd photo (horse), I would prefer not having a tree coming out of the horse's back. Perhaps it can be cropped? </p><p></p><p>The 3rd photo I'd like to see her from the other end of the guitar but at more of an angle than how you did the first photo. Seeing her face is important as well as one or both of her hands. If you are going to take her photo from this end of the guitar, I'd like to see her face much closer and the fingers on the strings. If you are going to include that much background, can you use a wider aperture to blur more of the background? </p><p></p><p>The 4th photo is my favorite! If her fingers/hand would have been more relaxed, that would have made it nicer, but other than that, I really like this one! <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite1" alt=":)" title="Smile :)" loading="lazy" data-shortname=":)" /></p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="hark, post: 215668, member: 13196"] Nice job! First of all, the forum rules only allow one photo per thread so don't be surprised when a mod jumps in here. I like the first photo but would prefer to see it cropped by removing the left side of the photo and cropping tight to her hair. The 2nd photo (horse), I would prefer not having a tree coming out of the horse's back. Perhaps it can be cropped? The 3rd photo I'd like to see her from the other end of the guitar but at more of an angle than how you did the first photo. Seeing her face is important as well as one or both of her hands. If you are going to take her photo from this end of the guitar, I'd like to see her face much closer and the fingers on the strings. If you are going to include that much background, can you use a wider aperture to blur more of the background? The 4th photo is my favorite! If her fingers/hand would have been more relaxed, that would have made it nicer, but other than that, I really like this one! :) [/QUOTE]
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