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Message: <blockquote data-quote="Horoscope Fish" data-source="post: 369836" data-attributes="member: 13090">I think it's a pretty good conversion overall, to B&W. I like the concept of the shot and the shallow DoF. To improve on the shot I would suggest you frame it a little differently. I'd like to see a little "breathing room" on the left edge and a little less space on the right. The brushes are your focal point and create a strong, hard line and the way the shot is framed currently, that line leads my eye right out of the shot. See where you've clipped the bristles? Give the shot an inch or so space on that edge, at the expense of the corner of the pencil box, and I think you'd be just about golden.</blockquote>